Alright...
I didn't really like the keyboard thingy going on there, nor the vocals. The guitar is pretty intense, but not the intense i like. If you worked on making it more intense, i'd probably change my mind. The soloing is good, like my soloing techniques, it could use some working on. The riffs are good too, But again with the whole intense thing. Work on that and i'd be very impressed
6/10
3/5